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©2006-2009 ~4dmen
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I decided to try my hand at comics. This is the first attempt and any constructive criticism or praise would be welcome.

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:iconwarman333:
i didn't get it

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Hurrrrrrrrr
:icontsodynasty:
1.) Inside jokes never work.

I understand that you are poking fun at inside jokery but this still almost seems a little much. My suggestion as another burgeoning comic writer
have the last panel say

"Okay! I finished the first page!"

"Great! Only 42 more more to go!"


2.) Compared to the rest of the picture, the faces seem blurry. Its driving me nuts as my eye keeps slipping off the faces.
:icon4dmen:
Thanks for the tips. I've never been good with people, so I just took emoticon sized people and enlarged them. I'm planning on revamping them when I get a chance.

As for the joke itself, it was designed for a particular audience. The members of the H*R Wiki Forum. So I didn't expect everyone to find it as amusing, but I do appreciate the input.
:icon4dmen:
The comic itself is a bit of an inside joke, mainly written for those on the H*R Wiki Forum. Most of their running jokes take a while to explain.

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June 28, 2006
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